A great starting point for those new to developmental editing, this mini-edit (up to 10,000 words) helps identify key issues early in your manuscript. Common areas I assess include:
- Opening Strength – Does the manuscript start in the right place? Too fast or slow?
- Engagement – Is the hook compelling? Does the POV enhance the story?
- Character Depth – Are the protagonist and antagonist well-developed?
- Conflict & Genre – Is there enough tension? Are the genre expectations clear?
- Story Balance – Does the narrative blend action, theme, and setting effectively?
This service is ideal for writers who are:
- New to developmental editing
- Looking for reassurance you’re on the right track
- Interested in trialling my editing before committing fully.
You’ll receive an editorial report with craft-based suggestions to help strengthen your work, with suggestions being just that!
Initial investment will be deducted if you decide to upgrade to a full developmental edit or manuscript critique at a later date.
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